I have to agree about the still photography. In the middle of a piece that’s been entirely video, the stills were jolting and out of place. I can understand that maybe they couldn’t shoot video that day or that perhaps the video wasn’t compelling enough, but I still think including the stills through off the rhythm of the piece.

Now for the titles, the onscreen text... Too many! I didn’t remember much of that information after watching. I remembered the stuff that the people on camera told me, but the text flew by, seeming unimportant. Plus, the way the filmmaker tried to punctuate using the text on a black background almost parodied the somber mood I think he was going for.

Any why is the drummer talking at the end? He doesn’t have much of a connection to the story, and if he does, it wasn’t fleshed out enough for me to want to hear him speak. Better, I think, would have been to just let him play and note him in the end credits.

In all, good length. Good subject matter but the onscreen titles were a crutch for the storyteller here.